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Showing posts with label southeastern Minnesota. Show all posts
Showing posts with label southeastern Minnesota. Show all posts

Monday, March 21, 2022

How Now Brown Cow?

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Driftless takes place primarily in the 1940s. That was the last decade before medications were being developed to treat the diagnosis that sent our protagonist to the hospital. I wanted to know more about that treatment before medicine, so the 40s was the time frame. Thus, the story begins before my birth.

It is true that my brother and sisters were but small children themselves in the 40s, but still they had a lot to contribute to the writing of the book. Sometimes one or more of them were surprised to hear about something that only one of the older ones recalled. Or to hear about an event that occurred while the other children were not present. Memories are fascinating things, are they not? Sixty or even seventy years later, my six siblings were able to resurrect memories that would have otherwise faded into oblivion.   

I loved being able to use snippets of my siblings' memories in the writing of the book. I've often envied the years that the six of them had together--the shared chores, the hush-hush conversations meant only for their ears, the plotting to sneak something past our parents (although how often that was successful remains vague). There were all those stories told at the supper table, the debates about whose turn it was to get the white meat and who got the drumstick. My Grandma Brevig, that lived with us throughout the cold months, always took the neck and my siblings foolishly thought it was because she liked the neck. Hah. Several years later, the children recognized the error of their thinking. 

Who would not envy those private conversations whispered in the dark, three little girls lying in an ancient iron bed, cocooned beneath heavy quilts. My brother and sisters were experts at engineering their own entertainment with virtually no store-bought toys.  There was an abundance of laughter, teasing, and bickering between them, no doubt.  Of course, with six little ones, there was the incessant clamoring to insert oneself into the conversation. Oh, what a busy and energetic household it must have been! And I missed most of it. Arrived too late on the scene as it were to taste the full flavor of seven children under one roof. Sigh.

This post and those that follow will be about my very earliest memories at home on the farm. In order to give my brother and sisters their due, I am dredging up my first memories of each of them, with me on the farm. I am sorry to say that I don't remember my eldest sister, Mavis, living at home with us. At eighteen, she had graduated from high school and gone off to Humboldt Institute in Minneapolis. I had just turned four when she left home.

My first memory of my second sister, BevAnn on the farm, is a favorite of mine. The more I think about it, the more I wonder if it really happened the way I remember.  But let's set that aside for the moment. I ask the reader to humor me.

I had a deluxe playhouse on the farm. I don't recall asking for a playhouse or anything of that sort. In retrospect, maybe my parents were coming to terms with the fact that one by one, the first six children were going to be leaving home. Maybe my mom, Vivian said, "Oh, Alvin. That poor little Ardys will be left alone when they're all gone. She'll have to play by herself. So sad." On the other hand, she probably didn't say anything of the sort. But let's just go with it for now.


My playhouse was originally an old chicken coop, painted white, and it hadn't seen hard use. It had a gently sloping roof from front to back that was covered with aluminum siding. When it rained, it sounded like a Gatling gun overhead. On the front was a Dutch door which I thought was the coolest thing. I could open the top half, making the playhouse bright and sunny inside. A four-pane window was on either side of the door. 

The chicken coop had been sitting unused on one of the other two farms that were part of our Fertile Acres Brown Swiss Farm. My grandma lived in one of those two farmhouses during the warm months, while the third house sat empty. Obviously, the chicken coop had to be moved onto our farmyard to become my playhouse. I don't remember any talk about a plan to bring the chicken coop to our farm. My only memory of the move was seeing it take place. And this is where my sister, BevAnn comes in.

I was barefoot in the barnyard and looking beyond it to the narrow road rising up and over the cow pass. Up over that rise appeared my dad driving the tractor. He was pulling a hay wagon and atop the wagon sat the white chicken coop. My recollection is very clear on this next point. My sister was riding inside the chicken coop as it moved down the road.  She stood just inside the door which was open at the top, closed on the bottom.  She saw me watching the chicken coop travel down the road and she waved to me. This is what she called out, "How - now - brown - cow-?" That is my entire memory of the arrival of what became my wonderful playhouse.

Now, there may be a few details about that memory that one might find suspect. The first might be, did Alvin really allow his daughter to ride inside the chicken coop while it was being moved down the road? Hmmm. Given that she'd ridden on a moving haywagon countless times by then, I think he would have said, "Alright." The second detail that might be questioned is whether I could have really heard the words that she called out to me from across the barnyard and over the sound of the loud tractor. Hmph. To that, I'm going to say that the higher pitch of her voice would surely have broadcast toward me right over the top of the deeply guttural, droning sound of the tractor engine. Wouldn't it? The third detail might be, why would she have yelled out "How - now - brown - cow -?" Well, why not?




Friday, January 21, 2022

2021 Writer's Digest e-Book Award for Contemporary Fiction




2021 WRITER'S DIGEST e-BOOK AWARD

Contemporary Fiction

I am honored that Driftless has been chosen to receive the 2021 Writer's Digest Award for Self-Published e-Books in the category of Contemporary Fiction. The official announcement will be published in the May/June edition of the Writer's Digest. 


I couldn't be more pleased with the positive feedback that I've received from so many people on my first novel. Driftless is a historical novel. I have attempted to portray the type of family farming that was practiced in the Bluff Country of southeastern Minnesota in the 1940's and 50's. I also allowed myself some small measure of pride in writing about the determination and loving character of my Norwegian-American ancestors who settled that area.


From the readers' feedback received, I should say that the considerably more weighty historical story in Driftless is about the kind of mental health treatment that was available during the 1940's and 50's for folks hospitalized in  Minnesota state hospitals. It was, of course, no better and no worse than what was available across our nation and world at that time. Too many families never saw their loved ones return home to them from the hospitals. And many of those hospitalized were not, in fact, mentally ill.  Those who behaved "differently" because of other physical and/or cognitive limitations for which there was inadequate care in the community led to many hospitalizations. That was a story that I especially felt needed to be told.
Looking forward to Author readings at bookstores

Thank you to all who have read the book and a round of applause to everyone who has encouraged others to read it, too. It seems to me that there can be no greater compliment for a book (and its author) than to have a reader ask a friend, "Have you read this book yet? Oh, you should read it. I think you'd like it."

Thank you too, to everyone that has posted a review on Amazon. Even a sentence or two makes a valuable review.  (I'm hoping for 100 in 2022). We all know that there are so many great books to read. "So many books, so little time," is what I often think; it can be hard to decide which book I'll read next. I do look to see what other readers say about a book before I pick it up to read. I greatly appreciate all of your reviews.  And I welcome the recommendations of others about books you think I might like.  

I am working on a second historical novel whose setting is also within the southeastern corner of Minnesota. I can't help but write about the kind of life that children had in those years before I grew up and away. Yet, even now when I close my eyes and remember children playing and learning to work alongside parents, I can't help but see that place and time where the summer-time creeks ran clear and cold between hardwood bluffs. Autumn displayed her colors like a glorious quilt there. The winter's snow lay thick and sparkling in the moonlight, and the smell of freshly-cut alfalfa in the spring was...ahhh. It's still hard for me to imagine anyplace better to be a kid.
Ardys Brevig Richards



 

Tuesday, September 21, 2021

Pinterest Board Accompanies historical novel, Driftless

Driftless is a historical novel. Just for fun, I have designed a Pinterest Board as a companion to the book. My Pinterest board reflects many of the author's memories of growing up on a family dairy farm within the Driftless Region of southeastern Minnesota. Those memories informed the writing of portions of this story.

Driftless is set on a family dairy farm in 1948. The family name (Fjeld) and the name of its exact location (Hawk Ridge) are all fictitious.  Spring Grove, however, would have been the actual hometown for the families living on Hawk Ridge. That town and all other geographical place names referenced in Driftless are real places. Spring Grove was settled primarily by Lutheran Norwegian immigrants in the mid to late1800's. Like the author's own family of origin, the Fjeld family milks Brown Swiss cows; they raise pigs and chickens and they use a team of draft horses to farm the land. They also have a very smart herding dog named Teddy. Children raised on Hawk Ridge roam the farm and play in the wooded bluffs. They attend a one-room clapboard country schoolhouse within walking distance, as did the author. And like the author's family, the farm families on Hawk Ridge attend the rural Lutheran church a few miles away. 

As was true in 1948, people in need of psychiatric hospitalization were taken to Rochester State Hospital in Rochester. Many of them lived out the rest of their lives in the state hospital. Also true was that the orphanage in Owatonna, Minnesota was at one time, the third-largest orphanage in the U.S. The author has attempted to be true to the practices of the day within both state institutions. Neither of them exist today.


Minnesota is across the Mississippi River. Taken from Wisconsin.


Monday, July 5, 2021

Driftless is Published!

 PUBLISHED!



 
At long last, Driftless is published. I am so excited! 
The paperback version will be available before the end 
of July, but the eBook (Kindle) version is available on
Amazon.com now. 









Monday, May 10, 2021

Book Update and Syttende Mai 2021


To all followers and anyone awaiting the publication of Driftless, I apologize. I am sure this comes as no surprise to anyone by now, but as it turns out, I had a very poor concept of how long it really takes to prepare a manuscript for publication. How naïve I was to think the book would be available by the Syttende Mai (17th of May) celebration in my hometown, Spring Grove, Minnesota.  The story of Driftless takes place in my hometown and surrounding areas.  

I am so fortunate to have a good friend and author (for who else would invest so much time and energy) that is helping me with the nuts and bolts of publishing. There are still a few steps before final publication but it's getting closer. I have so much to learn. 

Despite the fact that the book, Driftless will not yet be published, I will be attending Syttende Mai (pro. somewhat like "SOOT 'n deh My") next week. It will be Spring Grove's 47th Syttende Mai celebration. It would have been the 48th but there was this nasty world-wide pandemic which interfered with... everything. I will get to see people that I haven't seen in many years. And, it will be the first time I will be in close proximity with more than a handful of humans since before the pandemic took hold in the U.S. fourteen months ago. 

Viking ship carrying Sons of Norway members,
in the Syttende Mai parade. c. 1984

Only recently have I dared to hug a person aside from my spouse. Only recently have I accepted and even initiated an occasional handshake. What a bold move that was! To touch another human being is such a wonderful thing. Let's not ever forget that. 

But on to Syttende Mai. What is the significance of the 17th of May, and why are people celebrating this date in Spring Grove, Minnesota? 

Syttende Mai marks the signing of Norway's constitution and independence from Sweden in 1814. In Norway, it is also called Constitution Day or National Day. It is celebrated in Spring Grove (and has been since 1973) because Spring Grove was the first Norwegian settlement in the state of Minnesota. There are representatives of other ethnic groups that call Spring Grove home now, but still, you would be hard-pressed to find a greater number of Norwegian surnames in any similarly sized town or state. (Maybe you could, but you'd be hard-pressed. Check out North Dakota, Washington and Wisconsin if you must.)

All manner of wonderful things happen during Syttende Mai, so many things that three days are required to celebrate properly. It's a time to reflect upon the Norwegian heritage of the area. It's a time to make and enjoy some of the foods that our Norwegian ancestors were preparing at the time of their emigration to Minnesota. Time to appreciate and celebrate some of the wonderful Norwegian folk arts and some of the Norwegian-American artists and authors that made Minnesota their home. There will be parades, banquets, car shows, theatre performances, birding, musical events, the ubiquitous city-wide garage sales, and lots more.  Check out the websites below for details. 

Occasionally, Norwegian may still be heard spoken during the Syttende Mai celebration, not as frequently as when I was a child, but there are still those that speak it. If nothing else, one might hear the Norwegian National Anthem performed a cappella by any number of random celebrants who learned it in Spring Grove High School. In fact, there's already a plan that when I meet with my classmates from the class of '74, we will do just that. Ah, the fond memories.

Syttende Mai

Norwegian Ridge Birding and Nature Trails

Giants of the Earth Heritage Center

Spring Grove: Minnesota's First Norwegian Settlement