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Showing posts with label 1940's. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 1940's. Show all posts

Monday, March 21, 2022

How Now Brown Cow?

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Driftless takes place primarily in the 1940s. That was the last decade before medications were being developed to treat the diagnosis that sent our protagonist to the hospital. I wanted to know more about that treatment before medicine, so the 40s was the time frame. Thus, the story begins before my birth.

It is true that my brother and sisters were but small children themselves in the 40s, but still they had a lot to contribute to the writing of the book. Sometimes one or more of them were surprised to hear about something that only one of the older ones recalled. Or to hear about an event that occurred while the other children were not present. Memories are fascinating things, are they not? Sixty or even seventy years later, my six siblings were able to resurrect memories that would have otherwise faded into oblivion.   

I loved being able to use snippets of my siblings' memories in the writing of the book. I've often envied the years that the six of them had together--the shared chores, the hush-hush conversations meant only for their ears, the plotting to sneak something past our parents (although how often that was successful remains vague). There were all those stories told at the supper table, the debates about whose turn it was to get the white meat and who got the drumstick. My Grandma Brevig, that lived with us throughout the cold months, always took the neck and my siblings foolishly thought it was because she liked the neck. Hah. Several years later, the children recognized the error of their thinking. 

Who would not envy those private conversations whispered in the dark, three little girls lying in an ancient iron bed, cocooned beneath heavy quilts. My brother and sisters were experts at engineering their own entertainment with virtually no store-bought toys.  There was an abundance of laughter, teasing, and bickering between them, no doubt.  Of course, with six little ones, there was the incessant clamoring to insert oneself into the conversation. Oh, what a busy and energetic household it must have been! And I missed most of it. Arrived too late on the scene as it were to taste the full flavor of seven children under one roof. Sigh.

This post and those that follow will be about my very earliest memories at home on the farm. In order to give my brother and sisters their due, I am dredging up my first memories of each of them, with me on the farm. I am sorry to say that I don't remember my eldest sister, Mavis, living at home with us. At eighteen, she had graduated from high school and gone off to Humboldt Institute in Minneapolis. I had just turned four when she left home.

My first memory of my second sister, BevAnn on the farm, is a favorite of mine. The more I think about it, the more I wonder if it really happened the way I remember.  But let's set that aside for the moment. I ask the reader to humor me.

I had a deluxe playhouse on the farm. I don't recall asking for a playhouse or anything of that sort. In retrospect, maybe my parents were coming to terms with the fact that one by one, the first six children were going to be leaving home. Maybe my mom, Vivian said, "Oh, Alvin. That poor little Ardys will be left alone when they're all gone. She'll have to play by herself. So sad." On the other hand, she probably didn't say anything of the sort. But let's just go with it for now.


My playhouse was originally an old chicken coop, painted white, and it hadn't seen hard use. It had a gently sloping roof from front to back that was covered with aluminum siding. When it rained, it sounded like a Gatling gun overhead. On the front was a Dutch door which I thought was the coolest thing. I could open the top half, making the playhouse bright and sunny inside. A four-pane window was on either side of the door. 

The chicken coop had been sitting unused on one of the other two farms that were part of our Fertile Acres Brown Swiss Farm. My grandma lived in one of those two farmhouses during the warm months, while the third house sat empty. Obviously, the chicken coop had to be moved onto our farmyard to become my playhouse. I don't remember any talk about a plan to bring the chicken coop to our farm. My only memory of the move was seeing it take place. And this is where my sister, BevAnn comes in.

I was barefoot in the barnyard and looking beyond it to the narrow road rising up and over the cow pass. Up over that rise appeared my dad driving the tractor. He was pulling a hay wagon and atop the wagon sat the white chicken coop. My recollection is very clear on this next point. My sister was riding inside the chicken coop as it moved down the road.  She stood just inside the door which was open at the top, closed on the bottom.  She saw me watching the chicken coop travel down the road and she waved to me. This is what she called out, "How - now - brown - cow-?" That is my entire memory of the arrival of what became my wonderful playhouse.

Now, there may be a few details about that memory that one might find suspect. The first might be, did Alvin really allow his daughter to ride inside the chicken coop while it was being moved down the road? Hmmm. Given that she'd ridden on a moving haywagon countless times by then, I think he would have said, "Alright." The second detail that might be questioned is whether I could have really heard the words that she called out to me from across the barnyard and over the sound of the loud tractor. Hmph. To that, I'm going to say that the higher pitch of her voice would surely have broadcast toward me right over the top of the deeply guttural, droning sound of the tractor engine. Wouldn't it? The third detail might be, why would she have yelled out "How - now - brown - cow -?" Well, why not?




Monday, January 31, 2022

The Sales Pitch

 What comes after a book award? I'm trying to figure that out. 

One thing, however, came immediately after the award--a sense of obligation (to the book) to sell it. Even though I am not a salesperson. Even though I don't enjoy pitching products. Never have.

You see, I worked in a fabric store once. It was many, many years ago before I started graduate school in social work. Although I am a capable seamstress who enjoys picking out just the right fabric for a project of my choosing, I was not by any means, the ideal employee for that fabric store. In fact, I quickly grew to detest selling fabric.

The store was one of those fancy fabric stores (I rather doubt they even exist anymore--haven't seen one like it for decades) where the employee is not a "sales clerk." Oh, no, no...that would be far too paltry a title. I was hired to be a "customer service specialist." The pay was minimum wage, but I was assured that I could double or even triple my take-home pay in commissions. I'm hyperventilating now just thinking about it.   

I was trained by a silver-haired, perfectly coiffed woman in her fifties or sixties. I had little ability to guess the age of my elders in those days. I don't remember her name, but I'll call her Dorothy because it feels right. No doubt Dorothy had had her colors "done" which was quite a popular thing in the 1970s and 80's. She was, unequivocally a 'Winter,' absolutely stunning in her deep reds and purples, vibrant greens and blues. How I envied her color palette.  Sometimes I caught sight of the two of us, side-by-side in one of the store's large mirrors. I tried not to look startled when her richly colored, impeccably tailored clothing in close proximity to my skin made me look sallow. As if I ought to crawl into bed and drink chicken broth until I'd regained my health. Yes, my co-worker, Dorothy was indeed a striking figure. No slouching, freshly applied lipstick after lunch, and always walked like she knew just what she was doing. Which, it turned out, she did.  

Alas, I was a 'Spring' and for a long while, mistakenly thought I was a 'Fall ' which prompted me to wear browns and rusts and golds, entirely wrong for me. As a 'Spring' I was relegated to cool reds and clear blues. I wore my assortment of pull-over sweaters from my college days along with all those leftover mistakes from my 'Fall' days and a dark-colored pair of pants. I rarely wore make-up. As opposed to Dorothy's shiny hair that may or may not have been molded to her head, my hair was a disaster. Thick and curly, even wiry, with a determined mind of its own. No doubt I slouched too, as tall girls sometimes do, in hopes of appearing shorter.

My job was to greet shoppers as they entered the store and ascertain the purpose of their visit. "What is the darling project you have in mind today? May I see your pattern? Oh, yes, that will look just lovely on you. What color do you have in mind?" Then (and this was where I failed miserably) I was to show the customer a selection of fabrics that would be ideal for her pattern (and skin tone) and sell it to her. 

Dorothy had demonstrated this to me many times. With her captured customer in tow, she walked directly to the correct aisle where the perfect fabric was waiting. With a bullfighter's flourish of her manicured hand, she unrolled the top of the bolt and proudly displayed the fabric between the customer and herself. She had perfected a facial expression that she unrolled for display at the same time.  It said, "Here it is! This is just the thing! This will be beautiful in your pattern. I am so thrilled to be able to show it to you. You will love it!" Truly, Dorothy had a very expressive face. 

If there was a day when Dorothy did not make the sale, I didn't see it. Customers obediently followed her to the aisle of Dorothy's choice, and her confidence in her chosen fabric was infectious. How could a customer decline such an obviously perfect choice? Dorothy was, indeed, what you would call an expert sales clerk.  Excuse me-- an expert "customer service specialist." 

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It didn't take me long to recognize that Dorothy had acquired several skills in salesmanship which I would very likely never have. The skill of getting there first to greet the customer was one that she, magically, it seemed, possessed.  And if there were two customers entering the store at the same time, she high-tailed it to the one that was dressed the nicest, more often than not, a middle-aged customer. I couldn't walk that fast without looking as if I were running. Further, Dorothy knew to skip the moderately priced fabrics. A well-dressed woman deserved to have the very finest fabrics presented to her. Obviously.  When Dorothy "allowed" me to take a customer, I discovered that it was frequently because she had another customer in her sights, a little way off. Someone she recognized. Someone that would spend more money than the customer I was helping. So, while I sold interfacing, linings, percale, and flannels, Dorothy sold Pendleton, silks, and velvets. 

Dorothy taught me a few lessons. The most important one was that I was not destined to be a salesperson. Even so, I'll continue to cart my book here and there to independent bookstores and I'll say, 

"I am an author and I've written this book." Then I place a copy of Driftless on the counter. "It's a historical novel and it won an award. Perhaps you'd consider carrying it in your bookstore?"   

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"What's it about? Well, it takes place in Minnesota but not the Land of 10,000 Lakes part of Minnesota.  The bluff country of Minnesota. The characters are farm families in the 1940s. A few of them speak Norwegian."

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"Why? I guess they like their native tongue." 

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"Oh. No.  They'd lived in this country since the 1870s--they're fifth and sixth-generation now, well, third-generation in the 1940s, in Driftless."                                       

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"No, no car crashes I'm afraid. No gunfights. And there's a young woman, a mother, who develops a mental illness and has to be sent away to a state hospital."

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"Yes--that part is sad, tragic even, but it's more than that. Most of the reviews about Driftless are glowing with praise for the book."

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"Yes, frankly I'm astonished, too. But well, there it is."





 

Friday, January 21, 2022

2021 Writer's Digest e-Book Award for Contemporary Fiction




2021 WRITER'S DIGEST e-BOOK AWARD

Contemporary Fiction

I am honored that Driftless has been chosen to receive the 2021 Writer's Digest Award for Self-Published e-Books in the category of Contemporary Fiction. The official announcement will be published in the May/June edition of the Writer's Digest. 


I couldn't be more pleased with the positive feedback that I've received from so many people on my first novel. Driftless is a historical novel. I have attempted to portray the type of family farming that was practiced in the Bluff Country of southeastern Minnesota in the 1940's and 50's. I also allowed myself some small measure of pride in writing about the determination and loving character of my Norwegian-American ancestors who settled that area.


From the readers' feedback received, I should say that the considerably more weighty historical story in Driftless is about the kind of mental health treatment that was available during the 1940's and 50's for folks hospitalized in  Minnesota state hospitals. It was, of course, no better and no worse than what was available across our nation and world at that time. Too many families never saw their loved ones return home to them from the hospitals. And many of those hospitalized were not, in fact, mentally ill.  Those who behaved "differently" because of other physical and/or cognitive limitations for which there was inadequate care in the community led to many hospitalizations. That was a story that I especially felt needed to be told.
Looking forward to Author readings at bookstores

Thank you to all who have read the book and a round of applause to everyone who has encouraged others to read it, too. It seems to me that there can be no greater compliment for a book (and its author) than to have a reader ask a friend, "Have you read this book yet? Oh, you should read it. I think you'd like it."

Thank you too, to everyone that has posted a review on Amazon. Even a sentence or two makes a valuable review.  (I'm hoping for 100 in 2022). We all know that there are so many great books to read. "So many books, so little time," is what I often think; it can be hard to decide which book I'll read next. I do look to see what other readers say about a book before I pick it up to read. I greatly appreciate all of your reviews.  And I welcome the recommendations of others about books you think I might like.  

I am working on a second historical novel whose setting is also within the southeastern corner of Minnesota. I can't help but write about the kind of life that children had in those years before I grew up and away. Yet, even now when I close my eyes and remember children playing and learning to work alongside parents, I can't help but see that place and time where the summer-time creeks ran clear and cold between hardwood bluffs. Autumn displayed her colors like a glorious quilt there. The winter's snow lay thick and sparkling in the moonlight, and the smell of freshly-cut alfalfa in the spring was...ahhh. It's still hard for me to imagine anyplace better to be a kid.
Ardys Brevig Richards